1 00:00:04.050 --> 00:00:10.040 WEBTOON Basics Converting script into a storyboard 2 00:00:10.040 --> 00:00:12.604 GCC academy 3 00:00:12.604 --> 00:00:16.154 Learning Goals Learn about how to write a script for Webtoon production Learn about how to convert a script for Webtoon production into a storyboard 4 00:00:16.154 --> 00:00:19.733 Learning Contents Writing a script Converting into a storyboard 5 00:00:20.129 --> 00:00:24.703 Kang Ji Young Careers: Mentor at Seoul Webtoon Academy Works: KingsMaker OH, MY GOD! 2014 NAVER WEBTOON, What if? JIOK Camp Short Story Season 2 Convenience Store Demon king 6 00:00:24.940 --> 00:00:27.700 Nice to meet you, I am Webtoons artist Kang Ji Young 7 00:00:27.700 --> 00:00:32.099 I am the author of Kingsmaker published by Kakaopage and Lezhin Comics 8 00:00:32.099 --> 00:00:37.540 In this lecture, let's explore the process of translating our script into a storyboard 9 00:00:37.540 --> 00:00:42.299 Before starting the lecture, there is something I always mention before starting theory classes 10 00:00:42.299 --> 00:00:46.580 I'll be discussing my experiences and providing some universal examples here 11 00:00:46.580 --> 00:00:51.220 So, even if I mention something, you don't necessarily have to think it's always correct 12 00:00:51.220 --> 00:00:56.020 Feel free to listen and choose what sounds plausible, but it's okay to let things pass by when things don't seem right 13 00:00:56.020 --> 00:00:58.259 For creation, there's no right answer 14 00:00:58.259 --> 00:01:01.740 Alright, here's what we'll be covering this time 15 00:01:01.740 --> 00:01:08.779 Learning objective for today is to learn how to write a script for practical Webtoon production 16 00:01:08.779 --> 00:01:15.300 Learn how to translate a script for webtoon production into a storyboard 17 00:01:15.792 --> 00:01:19.475 Writing a script 18 00:01:20.099 --> 00:01:22.699 The method of writing a script varies from one writer to another 19 00:01:22.699 --> 00:01:29.139 So, in this lecture, I'll be explaining with a mixture of typical methods and some added tips and tricks 20 00:01:29.139 --> 00:01:31.099 I mentioned that there's no right answer 21 00:01:31.099 --> 00:01:35.260 You can choose the method that suits you best and apply it 22 00:01:35.260 --> 00:01:38.820 Script writing, checking the volume 23 00:01:38.820 --> 00:01:41.699 What is the purpose of a script 24 00:01:41.699 --> 00:01:45.842 While there may be various purposes, its primary function is to facilitate 25 00:01:45.842 --> 00:01:50.580 The understanding of key dialogue plot progression, and length of each episode 26 00:01:50.580 --> 00:01:53.493 Before diging into drawing the actual storyboard, 27 00:01:53.493 --> 00:01:57.019 think of it as taking notes on instructions 28 00:01:57.019 --> 00:02:02.220 Among them, script writing plays a crucial role in checking the length 29 00:02:02.220 --> 00:02:06.620 Because the entire content included in the script must fit into one episode 30 00:02:06.620 --> 00:02:12.580 So, by looking at a script for one episode, you should be able to determine its total length 31 00:02:12.580 --> 00:02:16.699 When writing a script, please write each line to correspond to one frame 32 00:02:16.699 --> 00:02:21.500 Counting the number of lines makes it easy to determine how many frames are in one episode 33 00:02:21.500 --> 00:02:27.580 It's also a good idea to mark important directions with asterisks or underlines for your own reference 34 00:02:27.580 --> 00:02:31.241 That way, we can indicate and highlight that 35 00:02:31.241 --> 00:02:35.179 This directing style is the most important and significant aspect of this episode 36 00:02:35.179 --> 00:02:37.580 By marking it, even as time passes 37 00:02:37.580 --> 00:02:40.660 You can remind yourself that you intended 38 00:02:40.660 --> 00:02:45.740 To emphasize this particular aspect and that it needs to be prominently depicted 39 00:02:45.740 --> 00:02:50.619 This way, we can prepare other frames to complement that great direction 40 00:02:50.619 --> 00:02:52.899 Example of a script 41 00:02:52.899 --> 00:02:56.321 A script typically consists of dialogue and directing instructions 42 00:02:56.321 --> 00:02:59.980 Or other important elements such as notes or memos 43 00:02:59.980 --> 00:03:01.489 Alright, let's take a look at this example 44 00:03:01.489 --> 00:03:04.330 The example will be detailed and easy to understand 45 00:04:05.700 --> 00:04:10.759 This is the version of the script written as a script 46 00:04:10.759 --> 00:04:12.224 Shall we explore this frame by frame? 47 00:04:14.530 --> 00:04:18.100 In the first frame, we're describing the background and the situation 48 00:04:18.100 --> 00:04:20.946 I used a high angle to convey the situation 49 00:04:26.569 --> 00:04:29.600 A and B are sitting in a cafe, having a conversation 50 00:04:31.660 --> 00:04:37.323 Description of the situation, high angle, café landscape 51 00:04:37.323 --> 00:04:41.461 And make sure the large window, which will be important later, is clearly visible 52 00:04:41.461 --> 00:04:43.524 Make sure the large window is prominently visible in this scene 53 00:04:43.524 --> 00:04:50.141 These notes are preparations for describing the scene where an alien enters through the window 54 00:04:50.141 --> 00:04:55.122 Since the frame where the alien breaks through the window is the most important in this scene 55 00:04:55.122 --> 00:05:00.321 Everything from the character's expressions to the background setup is aimed at enhancing this shot 56 00:05:00.321 --> 00:05:04.111 In other words, all frames except for this one serve as supporting elements, 57 00:05:04.111 --> 00:05:08.059 They can be added or removed as needed 58 00:05:08.059 --> 00:05:10.550 Occasionally, if the script becomes too long or too short, 59 00:05:10.550 --> 00:05:15.260 you can adjust the surrounding frames that support the key frame to balance the length 60 00:05:15.260 --> 00:05:17.899 It would be one of the reasons why writing a script is beneficial 61 00:05:17.899 --> 00:05:23.901 The next frame introduces the characters to facilitate the event and arranges them in a natural flow 62 00:05:23.901 --> 00:05:25.643 So, the eye level is appropriate for this 63 00:05:32.930 --> 00:05:35.960 It can express the characters' faces, personalities, 64 00:05:35.960 --> 00:05:38.899 and even the distance between them 65 00:05:38.899 --> 00:05:42.027 In the last frame, I've marked it with an asterisk 66 00:05:44.641 --> 00:05:50.226 Because I deemed 'An alien has appeared' the most important part of the scene 67 00:05:50.226 --> 00:05:56.700 There's a low angle suitable for the entrance scene, and detailed instructions for the large frame are also provided 68 00:05:56.700 --> 00:06:02.779 The placement of characters for the foreground is specified, so even just by reading the script, it's easy to connect it with the storyboard 69 00:06:02.779 --> 00:06:07.980 By marking such important scenes, it becomes easier to reflect them in the storyboard 70 00:06:07.980 --> 00:06:12.660 If you write the script in a way that's easy to translate into a storyboard like this, the transition process becomes shorter 71 00:06:12.660 --> 00:06:16.179 Occasionally, one might not have written a script or failed to prepare it adequately, 72 00:06:16.179 --> 00:06:20.260 resulting in a storyboard without a corresponding script 73 00:06:20.260 --> 00:06:23.179 That happens when there's a separate writer for the script 74 00:06:23.179 --> 00:06:29.220 If you're familiar with Webtoon production, you can skip this process and go straight from the script to creating the storyboard 75 00:06:29.220 --> 00:06:31.922 However, for beginners, I recommend converting it into a detailed script, 76 00:06:31.922 --> 00:06:35.019 even though it may seem a bit cumbersome 77 00:06:35.019 --> 00:06:40.140 Because while writing the script, you can gauge the direction in your head and also check the length 78 00:06:40.140 --> 00:06:43.660 And writing is definitely faster than drawing, isn't it? 79 00:06:43.660 --> 00:06:48.339 It's better to capture the ideas that come to mind in writing before they slip away 80 00:06:48.339 --> 00:06:49.859 Directing instructions 81 00:06:49.859 --> 00:06:56.380 Earlier, I mentioned that it's good to write one line of script equivalent to one frame of the storyboard 82 00:06:56.380 --> 00:07:02.500 However, a common mistake is only counting the number of lines without considering what is included in each line 83 00:07:02.500 --> 00:07:04.059 Let's look at the next examples 84 00:07:31.588 --> 00:07:35.705 The protagonist enters, opening the door, and is surprised to see A standing inside, and approaches 85 00:07:35.705 --> 00:07:39.260 A steps back, as the door closes behind them 86 00:07:39.260 --> 00:07:42.779 Can you express this in one frame? It's difficult, isn't it 87 00:07:42.779 --> 00:07:46.666 There's the door to open, the surprise reaction, and the approach 88 00:07:46.666 --> 00:07:49.980 All happening within one frame, making it quite challenging 89 00:07:49.980 --> 00:07:54.779 When you write it like this, the script seems appropriately sized, but when you start drawing, 90 00:07:54.779 --> 00:07:58.380 you may find that the amount increases excessively 91 00:07:58.380 --> 00:08:01.330 Of course, the issue isn't just about the number of events 92 00:08:01.330 --> 00:08:02.275 Take a look here 93 00:08:08.859 --> 00:08:12.220 It's mentioned that the character enters, opening the door 94 00:08:12.220 --> 00:08:15.859 However, it's also written in the same line that the door closes 95 00:08:15.859 --> 00:08:19.859 It's not easy for one object to perform multiple actions like this 96 00:08:19.859 --> 00:08:25.660 While not impossible in comics, it would make the frame feel very cluttered and complicated 97 00:08:25.660 --> 00:08:27.502 Let's take a look at another example 98 00:08:55.978 --> 00:08:59.947 The protagonist, with a short sword and wearing light armor, has a tense expression 99 00:08:59.947 --> 00:09:03.897 In the densely wooded forest where the end is not visible, the protagonist discovers a mushroom house 100 00:09:03.897 --> 00:09:07.273 At first glance, this doesn't seem impossible 101 00:09:07.273 --> 00:09:11.659 Since there's a background and a character, it might seem plausible, right? 102 00:09:11.659 --> 00:09:14.154 However, there's still too much to express 103 00:09:17.628 --> 00:09:22.291 The protagonist needs to have a sword at their waist, wear armor, show a tense expression 104 00:09:22.291 --> 00:09:29.262 Depict the densely wooded forest, and also show the mushroom house 105 00:09:29.262 --> 00:09:34.777 If you draw the protagonist small to emphasize the mushroom house or the forest, their facial expression won't be visible 106 00:09:34.777 --> 00:09:39.688 If you do a close up to emphasize the facial expression, it'll be difficult to include the house 107 00:09:39.688 --> 00:09:46.876 In such cases, you can depict the protagonist standing in the dense forest with a tense expression and wearing armor 108 00:09:46.876 --> 00:09:52.725 It's better to separate the protagonist from discovering the house in the forest, plus the short sword 109 00:09:55.458 --> 00:09:59.607 Especially if it's the first scene where the mushroom house in the forest or the protagonist appears 110 00:09:59.607 --> 00:10:03.399 It's important to separate and sequentially present the information 111 00:10:03.399 --> 00:10:08.260 When writing a script like this, it's important not to include too many scenes at once 112 00:10:08.260 --> 00:10:11.319 You need to structure it so that one line corresponds to one frame 113 00:10:11.319 --> 00:10:13.174 One situation at a time 114 00:10:13.174 --> 00:10:16.000 Then should all actions be separated and written down? 115 00:10:16.000 --> 00:10:20.000 That's not ideal either because it can make the number of frames excessively long 116 00:10:20.000 --> 00:10:23.732 This part will be further addressed in the storyboard section 117 00:10:23.732 --> 00:10:27.821 How should dialogue be written for Webtoons? 118 00:10:27.821 --> 00:10:33.000 In many cases, when there's an original work, dialogue from the web novel is often directly used 119 00:10:33.000 --> 00:10:36.277 However, novels and comics have 120 00:10:36.277 --> 00:10:38.514 different reading flows and textual weights 121 00:10:38.514 --> 00:10:42.259 So using dialogue exactly as it is in the novel 122 00:10:42.259 --> 00:10:46.651 May lead to criticisms such as being too verbose or difficult to understand 123 00:10:46.651 --> 00:10:49.934 Have you ever come across a Webtoon 124 00:10:49.934 --> 00:10:53.631 where the dialogue was so verbose? 125 00:10:53.631 --> 00:10:58.859 That it made it difficult to understand the meaning? 126 00:10:58.859 --> 00:11:05.285 When all the narration is included in the Webtoon, it can make the content too lengthy and reduce the reader's focus 127 00:11:05.285 --> 00:11:10.887 Excluding such cases, most of the text in Webtoons consists of dialogue 128 00:11:10.887 --> 00:11:14.019 It's best to write this dialogue portion, which makes up 129 00:11:14.019 --> 00:11:17.659 The majority of the work, in a readable and concise manner 130 00:11:17.659 --> 00:11:18.907 Shall we look at the next example? 131 00:11:40.332 --> 00:11:45.421 Just like in the novel I become the Queen of the Chocolate Kingdom 132 00:11:45.421 --> 00:11:50.055 I will marry the ruler of this land, Java Chip Frappuccino III, in a grand wedding ceremony 133 00:11:50.055 --> 00:11:53.471 At first glance, it doesn't seem too long 134 00:11:53.471 --> 00:11:55.649 However, if you put this in a speech bubble 135 00:12:14.915 --> 00:12:16.282 This will happen 136 00:12:16.282 --> 00:12:19.262 The amount of text might feel excessive 137 00:12:19.262 --> 00:12:21.476 So, eventually, you'll need to cut down the dialogue 138 00:12:21.476 --> 00:12:22.159 Then 139 00:12:38.960 --> 00:12:41.099 Just like in the novel I become the Queen of the Chocolate Kingdom 140 00:12:41.099 --> 00:12:44.178 The Queen of the Chocolate Kingdom' 141 00:12:44.178 --> 00:12:48.851 I will marry Java Chip Frappuccino III, the ruler of this land, in a grand wedding ceremony 142 00:12:48.851 --> 00:12:50.733 It can be divided into two parts like this 143 00:12:50.733 --> 00:12:55.688 It also seems to take a long time to reach the point of the wedding 144 00:12:55.688 --> 00:12:57.440 And there are too many main concepts, 145 00:12:57.440 --> 00:13:00.054 giving a little scattered feeling 146 00:13:00.054 --> 00:13:04.559 So, when there's dialogue like this, you might want to change it slightly to fit the Webtoon style 147 00:13:04.559 --> 00:13:08.895 It's a good idea to consider the direction and rearrange the dialogue order accordingly 148 00:13:08.895 --> 00:13:10.153 Let's look at the next example 149 00:13:41.480 --> 00:13:43.440 I will get married today 150 00:13:43.440 --> 00:13:47.103 With this person, King Java Chip Frappuccino III 151 00:13:47.103 --> 00:13:52.440 Just like in the novel I become the Queen of the Chocolate Kingdom 152 00:13:52.440 --> 00:13:54.688 Now, it's easier to concentrate 153 00:13:54.688 --> 00:13:57.400 However, the dialogue still feels a bit long 154 00:13:57.400 --> 00:14:01.648 Moreover, with line breaks, it requires even more drawings 155 00:14:01.648 --> 00:14:05.836 In that case, considering the context, you can boldly cut down the dialogue 156 00:14:05.836 --> 00:14:06.509 Just like so 157 00:14:34.361 --> 00:14:37.816 I will marry today, the king of this country 158 00:14:37.816 --> 00:14:39.371 Just like in the novel 159 00:14:39.371 --> 00:14:44.628 At this point, you could illustrate scenes from 'From Novel to Chocolate' 160 00:14:44.628 --> 00:14:48.014 By writing it this way, the key information about the wedding comes first 161 00:14:48.014 --> 00:14:52.499 Then, you can supplement it with visuals of the king in the wedding scene 162 00:14:52.499 --> 00:14:58.381 Additionally, by incorporating the title of the novel into the illustration, you can prevent the dialogue from becoming too lengthy 163 00:14:58.381 --> 00:15:01.935 Once finalized and summarized with instructions, it would look 164 00:15:41.539 --> 00:15:43.183 Like this 165 00:15:43.183 --> 00:15:47.534 We remove any information that can be conveyed through visuals and combine dialogues where possible 166 00:15:47.534 --> 00:15:52.381 Even lengthy novel dialogues can be easily converted into Webtoon style script 167 00:15:52.381 --> 00:15:54.113 Does it seem too complex? 168 00:15:54.113 --> 00:15:59.440 You can start with this method when learning, but once you get used to it, you can adapt it to your own style 169 00:15:59.440 --> 00:16:01.945 It seems like I would write it in my own style like this 170 00:16:22.410 --> 00:16:23.153 Like this 171 00:16:24.796 --> 00:16:28.024 When writing dialogue, it's important to proofread for typos 172 00:16:28.024 --> 00:16:33.341 In many cases, when creating the storyboard, dialogue from the script is copied and pasted directly 173 00:16:33.341 --> 00:16:38.490 So, it's convenient to check for spelling and typos in the script before using it in the storyboard 174 00:16:38.490 --> 00:16:43.371 And I recommend writing dialogue while actually reading it aloud whenever possible 175 00:16:43.371 --> 00:16:47.361 Surprisingly, reading dialogue aloud often reveals unnatural phrasing 176 00:16:47.361 --> 00:16:51.024 When expressions like 'to', 'for', 'being' are included 177 00:16:51.024 --> 00:16:55.480 You can also prevent dialogue from being overly long or short 178 00:16:55.480 --> 00:16:59.212 While typing, repetitive sounds may seem pleasing 179 00:16:59.212 --> 00:17:02.301 But when read aloud, they can be a bit annoying 180 00:17:02.301 --> 00:17:05.687 'Do not try to tailor the importance of our mission to your standards' 181 00:17:05.687 --> 00:17:07.122 Like this kind of dialogue 182 00:17:07.122 --> 00:17:09.162 Who would write such kind of dialogues? 183 00:17:09.162 --> 00:17:13.201 When people are in a hurry or busy, it can happen 184 00:17:13.201 --> 00:17:18.221 Now that we've finished writing the script, it's time to transfer it into a storyboard 185 00:17:18.221 --> 00:17:20.657 Then how should we make a storyboard? 186 00:17:21.447 --> 00:17:25.249 Converting a script into storyboard 187 00:17:25.249 --> 00:17:28.092 Converting a script into storyboard 188 00:17:28.092 --> 00:17:31.350 Comics are a medium that translates text into pictures 189 00:17:31.350 --> 00:17:34.063 What is comics about? 190 00:17:34.063 --> 00:17:38.439 I think comics are a medium that conveys text through pictures 191 00:17:38.439 --> 00:17:40.954 Comics with beautiful artwork? That's great 192 00:17:40.954 --> 00:17:43.439 Comics with simple and basic artwork? That's fine too 193 00:17:43.439 --> 00:17:46.112 But in the end, those beautiful and simple drawings 194 00:17:46.112 --> 00:17:51.251 exist to convey the words in comics more effectively and emotionally 195 00:17:51.251 --> 00:17:54.439 By blending directing aspect with visual delight 196 00:17:54.439 --> 00:17:58.043 Here, the text can be a message, 197 00:17:58.043 --> 00:18:00.439 information, opinion, or explanation 198 00:18:00.439 --> 00:18:03.647 So when transferring script into storyboard, 199 00:18:03.647 --> 00:18:08.776 it is advisable to visually translate the concepts being explained in the text into a more intuitive form in the drawings 200 00:18:08.776 --> 00:18:10.172 Time to look at examples 201 00:18:53.746 --> 00:18:57.271 Let's express the subject matter indicated by the text in an intuitive manner 202 00:18:57.271 --> 00:18:58.914 Taking it a step further 203 00:19:04.073 --> 00:19:06.498 If there's a speaker expressing emotions 204 00:19:22.092 --> 00:19:24.597 Their or the listener's reactions could be depicted in the drawings 205 00:19:30.746 --> 00:19:33.815 When aiming to capture remarkable or pivotal moments 206 00:19:56.597 --> 00:19:58.617 It's important to highlight the essence of that moment 207 00:20:03.109 --> 00:20:05.571 If you want to convey where it's happening 208 00:20:05.571 --> 00:20:06.251 Then 209 00:20:22.885 --> 00:20:24.389 Draw the background 210 00:20:25.984 --> 00:20:29.805 Like so, you can express it appropriately according to its purpose and intent 211 00:20:29.805 --> 00:20:34.063 Writing speech bubbles should be centered to make it easier for the reader to follow 212 00:20:34.063 --> 00:20:39.172 So, to achieve intuitive direction, you simply represent the text of the picture as it is 213 00:20:39.172 --> 00:20:43.706 Surely, you can intentionally create direction that contradicts or is unrelated 214 00:20:43.706 --> 00:20:49.330 It's often used to express dilemmas or irony and to create chilling direction 215 00:20:49.330 --> 00:20:54.290 However, in general frames, it's important to adhere to the instructions as they are to establish a clear narrative flow 216 00:20:54.290 --> 00:20:58.687 Some artists draw what they want to show in the frame first 217 00:20:58.687 --> 00:21:02.320 If it's a hand, they draw a hand; if it's an object, they draw the object 218 00:21:02.320 --> 00:21:03.756 Let's take another example 219 00:21:44.429 --> 00:21:50.330 A: Please take this. Handing a chocolate. A bashful face 220 00:21:50.330 --> 00:21:57.043 Chocolate A handing over/ B, Embarrassed expression/ In the background, a university campus 221 00:21:57.043 --> 00:22:02.073 B: I'm sorry. A: Why not? You are not with someone right now. 222 00:22:02.073 --> 00:22:05.538 B: That's... / Eye level 223 00:22:05.538 --> 00:22:10.568 Important frame. B: I have... / C Reminisces 224 00:22:10.568 --> 00:22:14.061 B: someone I like / Bashful face 225 00:22:14.061 --> 00:22:15.893 Such a classic content right? 226 00:22:15.893 --> 00:22:18.340 Shall we turn this script into a storyboard? 227 00:23:58.261 --> 00:24:00.221 It's done 228 00:24:00.221 --> 00:24:02.138 In the first frame 229 00:24:04.980 --> 00:24:08.865 This, chocolate is receiving it 230 00:24:08.865 --> 00:24:11.845 The character speaking also shows their face 231 00:24:13.221 --> 00:24:16.043 In the second frame, suffixes are expressed 232 00:24:16.043 --> 00:24:20.746 By placing the background in the background, it also provides context for the situation 233 00:24:20.746 --> 00:24:23.835 Can we express this solely with a high angle shot? 234 00:24:23.835 --> 00:24:25.073 That can be done like that 235 00:24:25.073 --> 00:24:29.588 However, in this case, since the receiving character is more important, I depicted it with a eye level shot 236 00:24:34.281 --> 00:24:40.003 The next frame serves as a preparatory shot to support the important indication in the following frame 237 00:24:40.003 --> 00:24:43.875 I depicted as many situations as possible in one natural eye level shot 238 00:24:47.053 --> 00:24:50.380 The next frame, that's the one with the important indication, right? 239 00:24:50.380 --> 00:24:54.251 Someone I like, this frame expresses it 240 00:24:54.251 --> 00:24:57.380 Expressing it like this would be enough do you think? 241 00:24:57.380 --> 00:24:59.974 Doesn't it feel like a bit lacking? 242 00:24:59.974 --> 00:25:01.310 We can add decoration 243 00:25:03.617 --> 00:25:07.419 Or express it frontally to add a beautiful touch to the expression 244 00:25:09.815 --> 00:25:16.330 Without explicitly explaining, this character C can imply that they are the person B likes 245 00:25:16.330 --> 00:25:21.053 And simultaneously, it also provides an answer to the dialogue 'Why?' that was mentioned in the previous frame 246 00:25:23.934 --> 00:25:27.808 By showing the expression of B, who uttered this line, in the last frame 247 00:25:27.808 --> 00:25:32.894 It expresses the character's emotions and conveys the truthfulness of the dialogue 248 00:25:32.894 --> 00:25:37.132 What do you think? Making a storyboard wasn't as difficult as you thought, was it? 249 00:25:37.132 --> 00:25:38.528 Combining the situation into one frame 250 00:25:40.984 --> 00:25:46.924 I previously mentioned not to cram too many situations into one frame when writing the script 251 00:25:46.924 --> 00:25:50.043 But what do you think about this list's name? 252 00:25:50.043 --> 00:25:54.211 Sometimes, the script might end up being a bit longer than expected 253 00:25:54.211 --> 00:25:58.607 Or sometimes, while writing the script feels fine, when it comes to illustrating it, 254 00:25:58.607 --> 00:26:03.498 I realize that the pacing of the frames is too long and there are too many scenes that aren't crucial 255 00:26:03.498 --> 00:26:06.271 This often happens in dialogue scenes 256 00:26:06.271 --> 00:26:09.617 Knowing how to compress frames in these situations can be helpful 257 00:26:09.617 --> 00:26:11.924 Let's assume we have the following dialogue 258 00:26:49.637 --> 00:26:51.875 A: Do you like him? 259 00:26:51.875 --> 00:26:54.073 A and B talking in front of a vending machine 260 00:26:54.073 --> 00:26:57.221 B: No, he's just a guy I know 261 00:26:57.221 --> 00:26:59.845 B: She ignores him and gets a drink 262 00:26:59.845 --> 00:27:03.578 A: You hang out with some guy you just know in Hongdae on a Friday night? 263 00:27:03.578 --> 00:27:05.479 B: Gets surprised 264 00:27:05.479 --> 00:27:08.439 B: Hey, how did you know that? 265 00:27:08.439 --> 00:27:10.271 B turns her head towards A 266 00:27:10.271 --> 00:27:13.508 A: I just assumed but you confesses right away 267 00:27:13.508 --> 00:27:16.726 The conversation flows well but isn't it too long? 268 00:27:16.726 --> 00:27:18.528 If we were to express all of this in frames 269 00:28:24.845 --> 00:28:29.637 It would result in multiple frames like this 270 00:28:29.637 --> 00:28:33.122 Things aren't even that important but takes up too much volume 271 00:28:33.122 --> 00:28:38.370 So, in such cases, it's best to gather as much as possible into one frame 272 00:28:38.370 --> 00:28:40.429 Shall we take a look at the compressed example 273 00:29:15.746 --> 00:29:17.716 We can compress it like this 274 00:29:17.716 --> 00:29:19.419 Let's convert this into a storyboard? 275 00:29:39.885 --> 00:29:42.063 Like so 276 00:29:42.063 --> 00:29:45.845 With fewer frames than before, it remains clean without significantly affecting the flow, doesn't it? 277 00:29:45.845 --> 00:29:48.607 If necessary, we can further reduce it from here 278 00:31:00.231 --> 00:31:02.310 We can also summarize like this 279 00:31:02.310 --> 00:31:04.588 Did you get a sense of how it can be compressed? 280 00:31:04.588 --> 00:31:09.122 Combining actions or reactions of characters into a single moment 281 00:31:09.122 --> 00:31:11.875 And merging subsequent dialogues helps in condensing the content 282 00:31:11.875 --> 00:31:18.132 As you reduce, each frame carries more information, but the importance of each frame may decrease slightly 283 00:31:18.132 --> 00:31:22.439 You can adjust by reducing or expanding as needed 284 00:31:22.439 --> 00:31:26.112 This skill is helpful for quickly adjusting the volume, but if you develop it as a habit 285 00:31:26.112 --> 00:31:31.330 It can prevent frames from becoming bloated over time 286 00:31:31.330 --> 00:31:34.439 I recommend getting used to it in advance 287 00:31:34.439 --> 00:31:38.538 It's closely related to pacing control that will follow later on 288 00:31:38.538 --> 00:31:40.231 Controlling tempo 289 00:31:40.231 --> 00:31:42.766 When initially crafting a script, a common mistake is 290 00:31:42.766 --> 00:31:46.033 'If I use a lot of frames, they'll read it more slowly, right?,' 291 00:31:46.033 --> 00:31:50.677 Or, 'the farther apart the frames are, the longer they'll take to read?' 292 00:31:50.677 --> 00:31:53.439 The problem is that this isn't particularly effective 293 00:31:53.439 --> 00:31:57.300 Increasing the number of frames and spacing them farther apart 294 00:31:57.300 --> 00:32:01.786 To control the reading pace can lead to an increase in volume without necessarily 295 00:32:01.786 --> 00:32:05.290 Adding density to the information contained within them 296 00:32:05.290 --> 00:32:12.191 Foot only frames, eye only frames, sudden realization frames 297 00:32:12.191 --> 00:32:13.102 Familiar right? 298 00:32:15.142 --> 00:32:21.290 Often, this results in mixing preparatory actions in frames to transition to the next action 299 00:32:21.290 --> 00:32:24.667 However, these frames contain little information 300 00:32:24.667 --> 00:32:27.736 Because they serve to connect one frame to the next 301 00:32:27.736 --> 00:32:32.439 If there are too many of these frames, readers may not feel compelled to linger on them 302 00:32:32.439 --> 00:32:36.637 Instead, they might read through them more quickly, without taking their time 303 00:32:36.637 --> 00:32:40.696 When reading speed increases, more and larger frames are necessary, 304 00:32:40.696 --> 00:32:43.726 and readers end up reading even faster 305 00:32:43.726 --> 00:32:49.687 The best approach is to achieve a consistent direction with the help of the text to maintain an appropriate pace 306 00:32:49.687 --> 00:32:54.023 Let's use techniques like combining frames to increase the amount of information each frame conveys, 307 00:32:54.023 --> 00:32:58.271 while being mindful not to unnecessarily increase the number of frames 308 00:32:58.271 --> 00:33:03.409 Writing a script in advance helps prevent the expansion of frames by allowing you to grasp the flow beforehand 309 00:33:03.409 --> 00:33:05.746 However, is that always feasible? 310 00:33:05.746 --> 00:33:09.947 Even while writing a script, you might occasionally get carried away 311 00:33:09.947 --> 00:33:12.657 And create repetitive frames to build the flow 312 00:33:12.657 --> 00:33:17.736 It can become a habit, and once you become accustomed to this style, you might naturally continue using it 313 00:33:17.736 --> 00:33:23.132 So, it's important to develop a habit of documenting important frames 314 00:33:23.132 --> 00:33:28.657 Using frames that connect important frames before and after, 315 00:33:28.657 --> 00:33:31.913 and preparing frames, helps readers to follow the flow 316 00:33:31.913 --> 00:33:34.607 By providing compressed information in other frames 317 00:33:34.607 --> 00:33:38.974 This is true not only when writing scripts but also in everyday conversations between people 318 00:33:38.974 --> 00:33:42.993 In conversation, we often use phrases like "by the way" before less important remarks 319 00:33:42.993 --> 00:33:45.528 Or, Oh! I just remembered something really important! 320 00:33:45.528 --> 00:33:49.637 By frequently using phrases like this to emphasize subsequent remarks, what effect do you think it will have? 321 00:33:49.637 --> 00:33:54.716 Ah! I just remembered something really important! Hey, this tteokbokki is delicious! something like this 322 00:33:54.716 --> 00:33:59.439 At first, people might find it interesting, but later on, they might think, "There they go again, overreacting! 323 00:33:59.439 --> 00:34:03.142 Or they might think, "There they go again, showing off! 324 00:34:03.142 --> 00:34:04.970 The same applies to comics directing as well 325 00:34:04.970 --> 00:34:08.825 It's best to use such directing style only when it's really important 326 00:34:08.825 --> 00:34:11.677 Typing script format, designing speech bubble 327 00:34:11.677 --> 00:34:16.984 Another consideration when creating a storyboard is to ensure that script format to be typed at all times 328 00:34:16.984 --> 00:34:20.063 If you think about the purpose of storyboard, it's easy 329 00:34:20.063 --> 00:34:22.617 It is a blueprint to build a work 330 00:34:22.617 --> 00:34:23.974 It's the process of preparation 331 00:34:23.974 --> 00:34:28.370 So, you should be able to imagine what kind of work you're creating just by looking at it 332 00:34:28.370 --> 00:34:32.578 This storyboard can be viewed by the writer alone, but it can also be shared with platforms or assistants 333 00:34:32.578 --> 00:34:37.904 It can also be shown to collaborators such as writers, artists, and others involved in the project 334 00:34:37.904 --> 00:34:41.875 You could even show it to close friends and ask them if they find it interesting 335 00:34:41.875 --> 00:34:45.439 But it would be difficult if it's written in illegible handwriting, wouldn't it? 336 00:34:45.439 --> 00:34:48.122 So, it's better to type it out 337 00:34:48.122 --> 00:34:51.825 At this point, you can choose fonts and speech bubble styles according to your taste 338 00:34:51.825 --> 00:34:58.201 But it's best to maintain consistency within the work as I emphasized 339 00:34:58.201 --> 00:35:02.528 This consistency and uniformity should be considered in terms of speech bubble proportions line thickness, 340 00:35:02.528 --> 00:35:08.439 the ratio of letter size to space consistent fonts and ensuring that lines do not touch major objects or characters 341 00:35:08.439 --> 00:35:10.241 Considering these factors would be beneficial 342 00:35:32.439 --> 00:35:36.974 Determining the proportions of speech bubbles and line thickness is likely to be the most challenging aspect 343 00:35:36.974 --> 00:35:41.063 I recommend aligning the speech bubble proportions and line thickness with the thickness of the frame lines 344 00:35:41.063 --> 00:35:44.914 You can use lines that are the same thickness as or slightly thicker than the frame lines 345 00:35:44.914 --> 00:35:50.666 However, the most important thing is to ensure that speech bubbles serving the same purpose are all the same thickness 346 00:35:50.666 --> 00:35:51.518 This is crucial 347 00:36:00.330 --> 00:36:03.231 Speech bubbles for shouting should 348 00:36:07.706 --> 00:36:12.320 have the same thickness and proportions as other shouting speech bubbles and likewise for dialogue speech bubbles 349 00:36:12.320 --> 00:36:17.300 This consistency helps the work look cohesive and ensures easy readability without any distracting inconsistencies 350 00:36:17.300 --> 00:36:21.716 Sometimes you may receive questions like, "Do you prefer vertical speech bubbles or horizontal ones? 351 00:36:21.716 --> 00:36:24.597 You can follow your own taste as long as they remain consistent throughout the work 352 00:36:24.597 --> 00:36:27.924 Since speech bubbles exist to convey the text inside, 353 00:36:27.924 --> 00:36:30.993 they should not be bothering to read 354 00:36:30.993 --> 00:36:37.558 While creating speech bubbles, it would be better if you could briefly show differences in thickness, proportions, etc. 355 00:36:37.558 --> 00:36:39.568 The proportion occupied by the text 356 00:36:39.568 --> 00:36:41.142 When this proportion changes significantly, 357 00:36:45.409 --> 00:36:48.984 the difference can be surprisingly noticeable 358 00:36:48.984 --> 00:36:55.548 Please ensure that the text is centered within the speech bubble and that the proportions remain consistent from the outer edge of the speech bubble to where the text is located 359 00:36:55.548 --> 00:37:00.152 So, if the text is too large or too small, it might make this proportion look odd, right? 360 00:37:00.152 --> 00:37:01.330 Fonts 361 00:37:01.330 --> 00:37:03.019 The same goes with the fonts 362 00:37:03.019 --> 00:37:06.548 There are actually no fonts that you absolutely shouldn't use 363 00:37:06.548 --> 00:37:12.053 Make the viewer focus on the content rather than external elements and read comfortably 364 00:37:12.053 --> 00:37:14.568 Just keep this in mind 365 00:37:14.568 --> 00:37:17.578 There are times when you might want to do the opposite of what this feature suggests 366 00:37:17.578 --> 00:37:22.766 If you want to make the font really annoying and cause discomfort for readers in that aspect, then that's your call 367 00:37:22.766 --> 00:37:26.677 When such an effect is needed, you can boldly use a different font 368 00:37:26.677 --> 00:37:30.243 Narration and dialogue fonts are often distinguished 369 00:37:30.243 --> 00:37:33.053 in less extreme cases like this 370 00:37:33.053 --> 00:37:34.746 This is about the fact that in comics, 371 00:37:34.746 --> 00:37:40.617 there are many types of lines used, such as frame borders, character outlines, object lines, and various types of speech bubbles 372 00:37:40.617 --> 00:37:44.043 This means that these elements should not touch each other 373 00:37:44.043 --> 00:37:45.545 Overlapping is fine 374 00:37:45.545 --> 00:37:47.528 A slight gap is also fine 375 00:37:47.528 --> 00:37:49.657 But it's problematic when lines touch directly 376 00:37:51.142 --> 00:37:52.241 If they are this close together? 377 00:37:53.756 --> 00:37:54.320 Or 378 00:37:56.954 --> 00:37:59.439 If they are this close together, it should be fine 379 00:37:59.439 --> 00:38:05.073 Overlapping or getting them closer together might be better off 380 00:38:08.855 --> 00:38:10.934 That could indeed give a sense of continuity to the lines 381 00:38:10.934 --> 00:38:16.340 And create subtle illusions at the points where they meet. It's a detail worth paying attention to 382 00:38:16.340 --> 00:38:21.696 Writing the script like this will make for a much more enjoyable read 383 00:38:21.696 --> 00:38:22.904 How was it? 384 00:38:22.904 --> 00:38:25.575 If you just keep this content in mind, 385 00:38:25.575 --> 00:38:28.706 it won't be difficult to convert a script to a storyboard at all 386 00:38:28.706 --> 00:38:30.885 Practice until you get the hang of it! 387 00:38:30.885 --> 00:38:33.142 Relax and take it easy! 388 00:38:33.142 --> 00:38:34.894 That concludes today's lesson 389 00:38:34.894 --> 00:38:36.380 Thank you 390 00:38:37.617 --> 00:38:41.417 Summary Writing a script The purpose of writing a script continuity is to easily grasp the main dialogue, situations, flow, and length of a scene Script writing TIP Make sure one can see the entire picture 391 00:38:41.417 --> 00:38:45.191 A line from the script matches to be a frame of the storyboard Important directions should be highlighted with asterisks or underlines Composition of script continuity: Dialogue, scene descriptions, other significant elements, and notes 392 00:38:45.191 --> 00:38:48.841 Converting a script into storyboard How to convert a script into storyboard Convert with intuition Convert according to the purpose and objective How to convert script into image storyboard Cutting scenes that have prolonged pacing and aren't crucial 393 00:38:48.841 --> 00:38:52.478 Consistent direction and appropriate pacing adjustments through cohesive storytelling Fonts and Speech bubbles Speech bubble proportions and line thickness The proportion of text within the speech bubble Consistent font style Avoid overlapping